One cloudy Thursday the hole fifth grade was going to the zoo, But when we got there it was all ready was dark outside when I looked at the clock it side ten o’clock in the morning, But know buddy wondered anything about it,but it seemed to be going backwards. It stayed pitch black for at lest two hours then it got liter and we saw the lions,monkeys,giraffe ,penguins and gorillas then we went to the bathrooms after that I looked at the clock it was noon we have to get on the bus now that was really really confusing day!
We had such fun at the zoo, but wouldn’t have been able to see the animals in the dark. That would’ve been confusing!
The thought that time could change like that is not just confusing, but scary!
It would also have confused the poor animals. They’d be thinking it was their bedtime.
Think about your spelling before you publish next time perhaps? ‘Nobody’ rather than know buddy / ‘lighter’/ ‘whole’.
Thanks for sharing your ideas around this prompt,
Jackie (team 100WC)
New Zealand
I well work harder on my spelling. this was my favert post.