a teacher was wearing her alligator shoes .But one day she lost her alligator shoe. She was very sad.Then she found her alligator shoes by climing a tricky ,mauve river .And she was happy again .but then her cat stole her shoes and ruined them .The teacher cried for 7 hours.The next day the teacher was walking down the street .A store gave the teacher a golden ultra rare alligators shoes .the teacher was SUPER happy sheput on the shoes and went back home and cried tears of joy .And they lived happy ever after
Your story is the most funny thing ever! Like the tittle.
Nice! Keep up the good work
you did good
Nice job! Although I think you need to stay on 1 part of the story a bit longer, even though it would make it shorter. Good job!
good story! but you forgot writing
love tittle
Your story was fun to read, with its twists and turns! You could make your writing better by using your punctuation more carefully 🙂
I like your story a lot but i think sometimes your sentences were incomplete.
I liked it overall though