I was playing baseball with my friend Chase he was pitching he threw a ball right down the middle BOOM the ball went flying and over the fence HOMERUN . Chase said “Go get it” “okay ” I said I hopped the fence I saw the ball then I see something else next to it what is it I say to myself? a HUGE teacup I pick up the tea cup forgetting the baseball and say Chase “I found a huge teacup” “Bring it here” he said I bring it to Chase he said “cool we should sell it on E bay”
good job michael
thank you
Michael,
I like how you made the character discover the tea cup during a baseball game because that seems like such a realistic way it could have happened. I found it interesting that the characters were willing to drop the ‘ball’ and head right to Ebay—seems to be a sign of the times.
Keep writing.
Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA